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1、 English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.




2、 friend and I

I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!


写法:这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物,就要笔墨均匀,两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友,也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是:找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况,再进行比较,通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。 时态:像此类题目的作文,运用一般现在时即可。

句型:因为涉及两个人的比较,不要忘记使用比较级句型:A+be+比较级+than+B。 注意:在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时,应一边列举,一边比较。不要一味指出不同,还要列举相同之处。两人能成为朋友,一定有共同语言和喜好,共性不容忽视。在表达喜好时,不同的句型应交叉运用,避免枯燥的重复。例“Our favourite colours are?”,“We like ?best”,“We both like?,too”,为突出不同时间做不同运动,用“On Saturdays?”,“On Sundays?”,形成鲜明对比。常使用并列连词and 和转折连词 but ,使文章读起来更流畅。结尾以How happy we are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐! 3、根据下面提供的内容,写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺,条理清楚,字数不少于50个单词。

Mary 是个英国女孩,五年级学生,十二岁。她向别人自我介绍,并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐,爸爸是医生,妈妈是老师,她非常爱他们,他们也很爱她。

例文:My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.

4、题目: My net friend(我的网友)



提示词:(1)computer (2)net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)

(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) (5)talk in English (用英语交谈) (6)good now

例文:My net friend

I am Tony. I a have a computer. I have a net friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net Ann







爱好:唱歌(singing)、跳舞(dancing)、看电视(watching TV)

优点:友好(friendly)、乐于助人(like to helpothers)

例文:My good friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in Yuying Primary School.

She is in Class Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!

例文:My Friend

I have a good friend. We are in the same CLASs. His name is Bill. He is 13. He likes sports very much. These sports are tennis, soccer and basketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays soccer twice a week. He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.

9、假设Jack 是10岁,短发,1.5m, 50kg; 而May 是12岁,长发,1.6m,45kg。请运用学过的句型介绍和比较一下他们的特征。

例文:Jack and May

I have two good friends. They are Jack and May. He is ten. He has short hair. He is 50kg now. And May is a beautiful girl. She has long hair. She is two years older than Jack. She is 12 now. She is taller than Jack. She is 1.6m. But Jack is heavier than May. May is 45kg. They are lovely students. I like them.





译:I have a best friend.

She has long straight black hair big black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind, she is cute too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She ishard-working.

She favorite season is summer, because it's hot ,she can eat ice- cream. She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs.

Who's she? She is my best friend ---Sun Meng Qi. She has a very good English name, too---Angle.





Everybody is good, my name is called He xuan, my English name is called Angle. Everybody knew that Angle is the angel meaning, I hoped that I forever can look like the angel equally happily, joyful, is carefree all day! I in the sixth grade, faced with rose the middle school now, father and mother, grandfather paternal grandmother, teacher schoolmates place the very big expectation to me, I will certainly not disappoint their expectation, will study diligently, passes an examination junior middle school'


s key class! In the future will become social a person of great ability and tremendous potential, will make the contribution for the motherland!



Deng Yaping,28,from Henan Province,is a talented woman player f table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the 1 l th Asian Games nd the 41st World Table Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic ames she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant chievements with the disadvantage of her Short figure? Her hard work and etermination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4,she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8,she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success,she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.


My grandfather is very kind to me. He loves me very much. I am the apple of his eye,but when it comes to my study he is very strict. Every day he spends more than one hour examining my homework. With his help,I have been doing well in my studies.

My grandfather is also warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day,a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took the girl to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.

My grandfather is a kind and easy-going man,but now he is living in another city with my aunt. We all miss him very much and I hope that I can go to visit him soon.


Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years.

She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says,“Practice makes perfect.”

She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English play.

She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her.

Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds. 《描写人物的英语作文》之十一

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects butalso is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer. Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.


A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.So I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever.

We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever。


关于人物描写的英语作文素材——1.描述人物心情的常用词语;2.表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语;3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语;4.介绍人物的姓名、出身...


sad 难过的 happy 高兴的

excited 兴奋的 pleased 高兴的

satisfied 满意的 angry 生气的 mad 疯狂的、生气的worried 担心的 disappointed 失望的

terrified 恐惧的 friendly 友好的

anxious 焦虑的 curious 好奇的

eager 急切的


like ------very much 非常喜欢------ love 喜爱be interested in 对------感兴趣 be fond of 喜欢hate 憎恨 be tired of 对------厌倦

be crazy about 对------极度喜欢 enjoy 喜欢lose interest in 对------失去兴趣

3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语:

good-looking 长得好看的 ugly-looking 长得难看的funny-looking 长相滑稽的 ordinary-looking 长相一般的

white-haired 白头发的 warm-hearted 热心肠的kind-hearted 好心的 absent-minded 心不在焉的bad-tempered 脾气不好的 near-sighted 近视眼的far-sighted 远视眼的 tall 个高的

short 个矮的 pretty 漂亮的

naughty 淘气的 lovely 可爱的

easy-going 温和宽容的 smart 精明的wise 明智的 bright 聪明的

diligent 勤奋的 lazy 懒惰的clever 聪明的 healthy 健康的humorous 幽默的 funny 滑稽的

silent 沉默的 attractive 有吸引力的talkative 多话的






身高:2.26米 体重:134公斤

最喜欢的食品:肉 最喜欢的颜色:蓝色

最崇拜的人物:周恩来 座佑铭:相信自己

1997:进上海篮球队 1998:入选国家队

2000:入选亚洲全明星队 2002:CBA总冠军主力成员

2002:成为NBA选秀(draft)状元并加盟休斯敦火箭队(Houston Rockets)




Hi, Tom,

You asked me about Yao Ming. Here is something I got when I searched the websites at home.





2、小组讨论 (joint negotiation ):将全班同学分成5个小组,每组8人,由小组长组织组员进行协商,交流观点,挖掘主题内容,查阅生词、词组,补充有关信息等,以便进一步完善或拓展其写作思路。(10分钟)

3、独立写作 (independent construction):根据讨论结果,小组成员每人拿出稿纸按照选定的题目进行实际的创作,包括编写提纲、打草稿等写作过程。在这个过程中,有困难可求助于组员或老师,但不能抄袭他人成果。(15分钟)

4、伙伴编辑 (peer editing):教师简要传授修改策略,学生阅读全文,并做必要的扩充、删节。每个组员依次评改其他三位组员的作文,并用红笔划出好词、好句、好段,最后定稿(15


5、教师点评 (teacher commenting):将每个小组的文章利用投影仪投到屏幕上教师点评,小组写作是集体智慧的结晶,作文质量高,也相对工整,教师批改时主要就内容和文章结构发表评论,提出修改意见,采用实分制(满分为15分),对于好词、好句、好段、长作文予以加分,以示鼓励;成绩进行登记。对小组写作的成果进行反馈:表扬成绩高的小组和进步的小组;把成绩最好的作文作为范文在全班朗读,从构思、谋篇布局到语言运用诸方面充分肯定作文的优点,使学生多接触正面的内容,把成绩高的小组作文张贴在班级“佳作欣赏栏”上,并要求所有同学与此对照,对自己的作文进行反思评价。


写作是我们英语教学的薄弱环节。主要原因有:① 交际能力的培养尚未得到普遍重视。② 不少学生缺乏写作动力。③ 目前考试的负作用。④ 学校和教师的原因。



1. 创造写作环境


2. 写作小组中的学生








Hi! I am a happy and quiet girl. I am from China. I am twelve years old. I am a pupil. I am in Class Three Grade Four. I have many good friends. I like many pets: the peacock, panda, rabbit and bird. They are lovely. I am tall. I have around face, there are big eyes, small mouth, small nose on my face. I have a black long hair. I like eating apples, bananas, chicken and...I like music, singing, running, pinting...I often say: Book is my good friend. I like it! Who am I? Yes, my name is Lv Enhui.Do you like me?

2、我的好朋友(My Good Friend)

Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts , music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

3、我的父母 My Parents

My parents work in a shoe factory. They get up at five thirty. They first get breakfast ready. Then they go to work by bus. They work there from eight to five.They come home at about six and prepare super for us. Mother washes clothes in the evening, Father often makes toys for toys for us.They are busy all day.(我的父母)

My mother is 38 years old, but she never tells others how old she is. She says she just doesn’t want them to know about it! My mother is a

well-known doctor in our area. She works hard. She often gets up very early in the morning and rushes to the hospital to look after her patients. She is kind to her patients and treats them the way she treats her family. Sometimes I wonder whom she loves more, her patients or me.(我的妈妈)

My father is 40 years old. He has short hair, big eyes and a small mouth. He is my best friend. My father is a teacher. He is very busy. He doesn’t have any holidays or weekends. Every morning he goes to school very early and stays with his students until late in the afternoon. It seems that he never gets tired! His students love and respect him. (我的爸爸)

4、我的新老师(My new teacher)

My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。

My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou .



There are three people in Jim s family . Mr. Green is his father . He is fat and he has short straighthair . He wearsglasses . He is watching TV. His mother is Mrs. Green . She is a woman of medium height . She has curly hair. She is cleaning the room . Jim is very thin. He is playing with the ball. They are all happy.



(一)I think she is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. She is exciting, amazing

and sexy. When we first met I felt her erotic emanation. Now I know that she is

extremely intelligent too.

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(二)She is 24 years old, and she has a 3-year-old son. So she is a mother. A sharp mother. She has a piercing in her tongue and two tattoos, one on her stomach (an Indian man’s face) and one on her back (it is non-figurative). I like them very

much. If you meet her, look at her face; it is so sweet. She has a birthmark on the tip of her nose.

(三)Sometimes I call her ”spotted nose.” It is so sweet. Really. Like a little cat. But her eyes. They are blue like the sky in spring or the ocean in a stormy night. They are so maddening. Well, let’s talk about her mouth. When she is smiling she has two little face-lines by the side of her lips. (dimples)

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(四)She is the most beautiful mother in the world and she is a real muse, a muse which every poet wants, lovely, wild, tender, sweet, and deep with secrets and love. A real woman.