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要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2. 分析并举例使其更充实. 中考英语作文万能模板:解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective

measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法).

Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).


这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一(A的优点之二).

----------------(A的第一个缺点).worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点) ---------------(我的看法).


(1) )

_ 观点一 People, differ in on this matter. Some _______. In 原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二 is no doubt that ___观点二______.

support the view that __观点一或二______. It also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has

negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.


as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease

There are attwo______. On theother hand, _______ is the In addition, ________ isare someto is

generally that mentioned As faras I am am sureopinion is both and

A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报A的议论。 给一个精确恒定的定义并非易事,因为它的概念涉及了科们可以这样描述A…


认 真分析后我们可以看到,A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先,从最直观的角度来看,A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话,如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡)。(举例)。其次,从更深一层次上讲,它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是,由于A所产生微小利益,却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以,破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。



Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate

the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .

It is clear that (1). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,

your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ).

Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .

No one can deny another fact that (4 ) .You donn\'t have to

look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5) .

It will exert a profound influence upon (6).

With reference to my standpoint ,I think (7 ). 附加

一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分:

How nice to hear from you again.

Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.

I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.


With best wishes.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分:

I have an announcement to make.


Please listen carefully and a groups.


1. 导入:



第2段:(正方观点) 列出2~3个赞成的理由)


Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论: 第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) オ 2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:


第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.


第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main 赞同A的原因) 第3段(列出1~2个B的优势)


第4段) オ 3.



(亮 第列出2~3个赞


1 第2Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, following may be most effective. First of all... 列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)


第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)


The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).

We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).



1. A good way to study English 学习英语的方法

2. A good way to study well 努力学习的方法

3. Travelling (7篇) 旅行

4. Haze weather in Shanghai(3篇) 上海的雾霾天气

5. My view on comic strips漫画之我见

6. My way to school (2篇)上学路上

7. My views on an English Festival (2篇) 英语节之我见

8. Using the Internet makes our life convenient 运用网络使生活更便利

9. Let’s learn to smile学会微笑

10. Growing up with good books (2篇) 好书伴我成长

11. The best gift I’ve received(3篇) 我收到的最好的礼物

12. Encouragement brings me power(5篇) 鼓励带给我能量

13. Being a polite person 做一个有礼貌的人

14. How to protect myself 2013上海中考满分作文

15. Write a letter 写一封信

16. This time next year明年此时

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My way of studying English is to read lots of English books. It is very efficient.

When I read English books, I can learn lots of extra-curricular words (which enable me to write better sentences as well as understand articles better.)Besides, it can set examples of writing articles for me. So I think reading books is a good way. It enables me to learn better with less time. However, there is no doubt that there are still some better ways. But no matter how we learn, the idea of using good methods never changes. A good method can always improve the quantity and quality of what we do, not only for studying English.

A good way to study well

In my opinion, reading widely is a good way to study well.

On one hand, reading widely can bring us lots of powerful knowledge which we can’t learn in class as well as give us much fun. Reading is like stairs of a high mountain. The more you read, the higher you will go and the better you will learn. On the other hand, reading can also open your mind, which will help you easily solve the problems which are so difficult that few people can work out. How useful the way is!

To sum up, if you read a book every day, you will study better and better.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As tourists, we ought to pay attention to our behaviors. First, respecting local customs is of great importance. We should learn some traditions of the place before we travel so that we won’t do things that make local people unhappy. Also, wearing a smile is a good way to show our politeness. Wherever we go and whatever we do, smile is a great passport that shows kindness and friendliness. When we are abroad or in other cities, we should always be friendly and kind to local people. In a nutshell, l hope you can follow my tips when you travel.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Many students plan to travel with their parents on holidays. But when we are travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors and travel politely. Firstly, we should keep quiet when we’re travelling. Secondly, it will be terrible to draw some pictures on famous buildings.

I think that if we do these things well, we’ll have a good time when we are travelling.

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Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As a tourist, we must pay attention to our behaviors. First of all, we must obey the rules. Next, we must keep the environment clean. For example, we should leave rubbish in rubbish bins. A clean environment can make us feel happy . we must respect local customs so that we can give them a good impression. More importantly, it will be very bad to hurt the ancient buildings because they are very precious and they should be protected . in a word, it is important for us to control ourselves when we are going for a trip.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. Quite a few people go abroad to spend their holidays. We should pay attention to our behaviors. First, we should put rubbish into rubbish bins instead of leaving it everywhere. Second, when we have a walk along the lakes, we shouldn’t throw stones into the lake. What’s more, we shouldn’t shout or smoke in public places. We should give others a helping hand when they are in trouble. Last but not least, it will be necessary not to draw here and there. I think if we do these,our travelling will be better.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. While travelling, we should pay attention to our behaviors. It is as important as enjoying the views. First, when we travel to another country, we should respect local customs. If we don’t, we may be not popular among the people in that country. Second , it will be terrible to leave rubbish in the river or on the road. It may make the view less beautiful. Finally, we should be quiet in public p places. If we are noisy, we may make others unhappy. As a result, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors while travelling .

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. When we travel to other places, we should pay attention to our behaviors. Firstly, we must respect local customs. We shouldn’t draw or write on the wall. What’s more, it will be terrible to leave rubbish. Instead, we ought to put it into rubbish bins. Last but not least, we mustn’t take photos if it isn’t allowed.

I hope that everyone can behave well during the trip. In this way, our life will be better.

Nowadays, travelling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. As students, it is common that we go travelling with our parents when we are free. But we must pay attention to our behaviors when we travel to other countries and local places.

Firstly, we should respect the local culture. Every country has its own culture and it’s precious. So we can’t be rude to their culture. What’s more, when we ave arrive at a famous scenery spot, wee can take photos with it so that we can have a nice memory about it . but we can’t destroy any of it. Instead, we

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June 7, 2010

Dear Lily,

I’m delighted to learn that you will be coming to Shanghai during the

summer holidays. I will meet you at the airport and be your guide during

your stay.

I believe there’s a lot for you to see in Shanghai. Yu Garden and the Jade

Buddhist Temple will show you traces of our ancient architecture and

culture. The Bund — the glory of modern Shanghai, — has been an

attraction throughout the 20th century. Modern constructions are also

very popular with tourists. You will be impressed by the Grand Theatre,

where world-famous musical concerts are often held. You really shouldn’

t miss the symbol of Shanghai—the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. The bird’s

eye view of the whole city from there is really wonderful.

Excited? I am sure you will have a good time in Shanghai.

I can’t wait to see you!


Lin Hon


国际青年艺术节(the International Youth Arts Festival)即将举行。作为


The International Youth Festival will be held in Shanghai soon and I am

honoured to be a volunteer.

As a volunteer, it is my duty to do my best for the International Youth

Festival. First, I’ll help to organize the festival. For example, I can send

out leaflets and put up posters in the streets. I can offer my suggestions

to the Festival Organization Committee. Second, I have a good command

of foreign languages. I can speak English and Japanese. Therefore I am

capable of being a guide and translator for the visitors. I’d like to answer

their questions to help them solve problems so that they can have a

good time during their stay in shanghai.

Also, I can benefit from the work as it can eich my social experience

and broaden my horizons.

I hope the International Youth Arts Festival will be a great success and

make a deep impression on the foreign visitors who attend.


How to make wise use of the computer

With the rapid development /fast growth of modern science /new

technology, the computer has played a more and more important role in

our society. Meanwhile, how to make wise use of the computer is also

very important.

First, I will learn what is happening / have access to immediate

international events through the internet to widen my knowledge. What’

s more, I can depend on the computer to write my blog and down load

pop music.

With the help of the computer, I find my life interesting and fascinating.



Nearly one-third of the students still prefer the traditional reading

pattern---newspaper while the rest have turned to the computer.

I take the newspaper. First, compared with the headline reading on the

net, newspaper covers a wider range. What’s more, newspaper reading

does less harm to eyes than on-line reading because the computer

screen flashes from time to time. Finally, we can take the newspaper to

read wherever there is no electricity or no web signal.

So, I have developed the habit of reading newspaper to learn what is

happening all over the world.



As a Junior Three student, I think I should not only study hard, but also

serve the society well if I am given a chance. The end of the junior school

life will provide me with a good chance to work as a volunteer in the

coming summer holiday.

What I most want to do is to take care of the old living alone without

relatives, I can read newspapers and interesting stories to them, help

them wash the clothes, and cook for them. Besides, I will try my best to

collect the rubbish in my neighbourhood to make the surroundings clean

and beautiful. Finally, I can follow the adult volunteers to advise those

who smoke in public not to smoke.

I believe I will have interesting experience as a volunteer.



Last summer I went to U.S.A to spend three weeks study with the local

students, where I learned a lot of new things and I will never forget the

Astrology class.

That morning we went to the local space museum to have my first lesson

abroad. During the class, we had a discussion on whether we should

carry out the space project. With the advanced teaching materials and

the experienced pr


ofessor, we had a general idea of our space success

and failure as well. I first realized how serious the population explosion

and the pollution was. What’s more, I learned the earth was faced with

more difficulties than ever before.

This class was not only my first class abroad but also helped me learn

how important space exploration was to us.




April 6,2011

Dear Mr. Li, I’m very sorry that I can’t follow the class to go on a trip next week. I

have to ask for a sick leave because I was caught in the heavy rain on my

way back home yesterday. When I felt uncomfortable, my mother took

me to the hospital. The doctor there took my temperature and told me I

got a high fever. So the doctor asked me to have a good rest at home

and have some medicine.

I hope my classmates will have a good time while travelling. What a pity I

can’t go with you.

Yours truly,

Li Ming




2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004Leave School 毕业时分

2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼

2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事

2008Love Around Me 爱在我身边

2009I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么

2010I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪

2011I’m a member of .... 我是……的一员

2012If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信,并给予建议

2013 How to protect myself 如何保护自己

2014 This time next year 明年此时




上海中考英语作文总分为20分,其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。 以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准:




二. 注意点:

每少5个词扣0.5分,拼写错误每处扣0.5分,标点,大小写错误每2处扣0.5分 3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上,得2~3分 内容和语言总分13~14分,如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给1~2分 通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,也不给分 开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。

先划档次:A档 18~15分 B档 14.5~12分 C档 11.5~8分 D档 3.5~0分 然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。


1. 内容空洞,没有清晰的思路,表达能力不强,总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达,所


2. 议论过多,描写不足。大多数情况下,我们把议论当成的作文的重点,所以常常会跑题。 应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像,不能只翻译了事。

3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子,重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达,比如:I must learn English well. 就可以换成:It is important for me to learn English well.

4. 结构散漫,想哪儿写哪儿,乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。

5. 都是简单句,缺少复合句。多用状语从句,宾语从句,定语从句及一些重要的句型,也 人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导(一)初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。

6. 连词的使用较少,句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些:比如: to my surprise (让我惊 讶的是), what’s more(而且,还有)等,让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表达。

四. 中考写作高频使用词组、句法


As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.


分正反两面论述:On one hand, On the other hand 分两点:For one thing, For another,分三点:Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least


All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说,简单的说 Last but not least

组织语言 发表观点的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not,

表示递进的 In addition Furthermore More importantlyWhat’s more Moreover 其他与“我”有关的写作材料 1、重点句型 It`s+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. Thatsuch a +a.+n. that too?to do Not?.until That’s why+句子 那是。。。的原因 It’s said that +句子

There’s no doubt that+句子毫无疑问··· It goes without saying that+句子 毫无疑问···There’s no need to do没必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 2、 提建议 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话,我会做``` It’s best to do 3、表示喜欢,感兴趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to doMake efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做···/计划做··· Intend to do/plan to doBe going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do 6、表示想/希望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、其他有用的短语 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/eich my knowledge/learn?by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in?. 8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on?vary from person to person

4、增添亮点 使用复合句和谚语 谚语举例 I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”. As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”

五.2002-2013 上海中考英语作文题目集锦

2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004 Leave School毕业时分

2005 Growing pains and gains成长的烦恼

2006I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Parent(s) 一个关于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me 爱在我身边

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么

2010 I'm proud of myself我为我自己感到自豪

2011 My Favourite Thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信,并给予建议。

2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”.(以“如何保护自己”为




Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. (以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)


Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)

lWhat do you want to do for your school?

2 Why do you want to do it?

3 How are you going to do it?


I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean." But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now,

do you think it is simple?

2 One possible version

I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.


上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself

1、What kind of person are you?

2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)

3、Why are you proud of yourself?



I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: "impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!

2. I am proud of myself

The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.



优秀习作1 上海市世界外国语中学 吴思怡


“Sow a habit, reap a destiny.” What do you think of habits? What can our habits bring us? Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Habits”. 优秀习作

Good habits are foundations on our way to success, while bad ones get in the way and hold us back. To begin with, good habits help us work more efficiently. If we get into the habit of tidying up our rooms, we will find it easy to obtain the things we need. Moreover, good habits leave others positive impressions. Showing our warm smiles is a habit which enables us to get along with our classmates and teachers well. On the other hand, bad habits can be destructive. Lots of people develop lung cancer just because of their habits of smoking. As you can see, habits really make a difference in our lives.



从语言驾驭能力看,本文句式丰富,语言流畅,既善于活用考纲词组如 “get into the habit of”,又有如“leave others positive impressions”等地道的表达,既有较复杂的主从复合句,又有短小有力的简单句,错落有致,一气呵成。



Your class would like to make time boxes for people in 2040. You start collecting things today and put them in the boxes. The people in 2040 will be able to compare their life with life now. You also need to write a letter to the people in 2040 introducing one thing in the box. 【Oxford 9B Unit 2 Writing】


To the people of 2040,

In the box you can find an energy-saving lightbulb. They all come from 2014. By holding the little bulb in your hand, you can sense its smooth, transparent glass-made shell, which is of oval shape. Inside the shell, some metal-made wires tangle with each other in a regular order. This is used to enable electricity to pass through the whole bulb to provide energy. Attach the bulb to a base and then turn on the switch, you’ll find the little bulb lighting up the dark room. Another characteristic of it is that it saves more energy than other kinds of bulbs. So this lightbulb is “green”.

We hope this will give you some information about life in 2014.

Yours faithfully, Angel







Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The thing that made me angry”.

( 以“让我生气的事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a guide:

? What made you angry?

? Describe the thing that made you angry in detail.

? How did you deal with the situation?

(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) 优秀习作

There are few things in life more annoying than being laughed at. When I failed to solve the question on the blackboard and just stood in front of it without saying a word, I could hear those annoying whispers. This really made a perfectionist like me get angry. But I couldn’t let the anger get me out of control. Instead, I chose to ignore those ironic words and focus on the question. In addition, I decided to work harder after school to get myself improved. Due to all the changes I made, I believe I can avoid being laughed at in the future.


全文结构清晰,层次分明,衔接流畅。本文从内容来看观点新颖、构思巧妙,以”being laughed at”被动语态的结构体现作者内心的不情愿,紧扣题目中的angry。作者侧重对于第二个问题的回答,以生动、细腻的文笔描写了站在黑板前的心理活动,让人读来有生临其境之感。而在结尾,作者不忘传播一丝正能量,驱赶了这个作文题可能带来的负面情绪。本文的内涵和语言都反映出作者的语言驾驭能力,以开头”There are few things … more … than …”来看,作者有丰富的语言积淀和极强的语言运用能力,因而全篇行文流畅,句式丰富,用词精准。本文值得初三学生学习借鉴。



Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I like reading ________ (detective stories, newspaper, magazines, comic strips, etc.) best.”

Use the following points as a guide:

? What do you like reading best?

? Why do you like reading them best?

? How do they influence your life?

(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、班级及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) 优秀习作

Magazines, as one form of ways to wisdom, are my favorite. Magazines combine the advantages of all forms of books. They have the diversity of information and at the same time, hold deep thoughts. There is rarely a thing that you can’t find in magazines. Reading magazines has provided me with the opportunity to broaden my horizon, gain knowledge and meanwhile, relax. Since they are more portable than others, you can roll them up and take them with you. In brief, reading magazines has brought laughter and knowledge to my life. I like reading magazines best.


该篇文章开宗明义,点名文章意图。从内容上看,从杂志包罗万象,开拓读者视野;到杂志放松读者心情;再谈到杂志携带方便可以随时取阅等优点,清晰详实地表达出了作者的观点。文章结尾再次点题,全文简短却简练,切题又精炼。从语言而言,作者具有较强的语言功底,能够熟练运用多样的句式和词组,如meanwhile, since, in brief, provide with等,使文章更富有变化和可读性。语句之间衔接通畅,用词准确自然。词汇量丰富,如wisdom, diversity, opportunity, laughter等。如果文章能在三点优点前用明显的词汇加以区分,如first, furthermore, what’s more等,能使其更加一目了然。



Someone says, “Sow an action, reap a habit; Sow a habit, reap a destiny.” What’s your opinion on this? Please write an article of 60-80 words on the topic “Habits”.




No one can deny that habits play an important role in our life. Everyone should have good habits and break their bad habits as well. In my opinion, habits can change your living style or standard. For instance, if you are an efficient person, you certainly won’t stay up late. This is a good habit that leads to a healthy life. Obviously, little habits undoubtedly change our life and even our destiny.



本文开门见山地给出观点: 习惯在我们日常生活中占据着非常重要的位置。我们应该养成好习惯改掉坏习惯。之后给出习惯何以重要的理由,并且以举例子的形式来辅助强调好习惯养成的重要性。最后一句总结首尾呼应,再次点题,全文虽短,却流畅通顺,一气呵成。



Writing Material

Trip / unforgettable experience / weekend /

Last year, I was lucky enough to visit … with my ….. Before we went there, we had got a lot of information from the Internet. XXX is a beautiful city and it is famous for XXX. Luckily, when we got there, the sun was shining and the wind was blowing gently. We visited some places in good mood. We climbed the hill and we were all attracted by the beautiful scenery on the top of the hill. We also taste a lot of local snacks. We had a wonderful time there. What an unforgettable experience it was!

Change / difficulties / how to learn English

As we all know, English is one of the most widely used language all over the world. It's important for us to study English well. I like English as well as maths and physics. But many times, the marks I got in English tests were not as good as those in my Math tests. I thought it over and over. At last, I decided to change my way of study. From then on, I have began to pay attention to listening. In my spare time, I also often read English magazines and newspapers In addition, I reviewed the English notes after class every day. By doing this, I made great progress in English and got a good mark in the final exam last term.

Love / thank you, xxx

There's some love around me, such as my parents', my teachers' and my classmates' and so on. I feel happy and warm whenever I get love from them. My mother looks after me better than anyone else. My teachers are always kind to me. They have done their best to let me know more. And most of my classmates are always ready to help me when I am in trouble. In return for this, I also prepare to help them at any time. I think if the world is full of love, it will become more beautiful.

What can I do for our environment? / green consumer / protect the earth

Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person to leave the classroom, I will always remember to turn off the lights. Besides, in order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. What's more, I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because of they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in

和谐社会/ a lovely Shanghainese

As middle school students inShanghai, what should we do? Firstly, we should love our motherland, and we should love our hometowns and take an active part in our school activity. Secondly, let's fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those who in need. More importantly, all of us must be honest in our daily life. What's more, let's work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.


We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things. Firstly, we should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.


Sports and games are beneficial to us . First, sports and games are good for our health. They can make us strong, prevent us from getting too fat, and keep us healthy. What's more, they can make our life richer and more colourful.

Jogging is now in fashion. Many people begin jogging because they believe it is very good exercises. It makes your stronger and helps you lose weight. It can also help you build up confidence in yourself.

Sports help to keep people healthy, make people wise, train people's characters ,and,above all, help people to live happily.

Playing table tennis is my favourite sport. I am so interested in it that I go to play it with my parents every weekend. I find playing table-tennis one of the effective ways to relax. It has not only build up my health but also my confidence in my study.


Travelling has many advantages. By travelling, you can broaden your mind, learn about other people, including their cultures, customs, the life style and languages. You can not only visit famous places and learn about past, but also get some relaxation and peace by eating local food and seeing beautiful places, so I think travelling is the best way of pastime.

Listening to music will make you feel relaxed. Whenever you feel sad, you can just turn on the radio and listen to some music. Music can relieve your stress. Music can cheer you up when you are sad.

Learning English

To learn English well, we must read more, speak more, listen more and write more.I took every chance to practise, such as going to the English corner, talking to foreigners, reading English aloud in the morning, and even speaking to myself from time to time. I kept practicing for a long time and my spoke English is much better than before. I try to make it a rule to listen to the English programs on radio or TV. On my way to school, I listen to some English tapes instead of music. I pick up my courage and take every chance to speak English with native speakers.


09上海中考英语作文题I want do sth for my school

I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean."But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?

10年上海中考英语作文I'm proud of myself

I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know,The students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment,I just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me:"impossible is nothing,""you could challenge yourself!"so with the encouragement of them,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line,I felt proud of myself,though I didn't get the good mark,I knew,I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!

11年上海中考英语作文I am a member of ...

In this world , every family has a mother.a father.a daughter or a son.For plenty of people ,families are very important .when you are very said ,you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness ,this is you family .

I am very gold to become my family member,beacuse i have a pertty good parent and a fairly younger brother . when i come back,i always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook ,she has lots of experience in cooking ,so my brother and i are heathly.

As a daughter,l shouldn't make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family.

12年上海中考英语作文 a letter to

Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports. Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.




大雨heavy rain 大桥long bridge 大楼high rise/large building 大错big/terrible/serious mistake大病serious illness 大地震major earthquake 句子的表达-注意英汉差别


e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货公司做兼职。





e.g. 我妈妈很漂亮。 My mother is pretty.

我们又唱又跳。 We sang and danced.

我们邀请他们到上海来玩。We invited them to come to Shanghai for a visit.

你上课常常缺席所以我想要提醒你。You are often absent from class so I want to remind you.


活到老,学到老。One is never too old to learn.

很难说谁对谁错。It’s hard to tell who is right and who is wrong.

昨天找到了丢失的钢笔。The lost pen was found yesterday.

上饭店吃饭很贵。It’s expensive to eat out.

乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。Traveling by plane is faster and more convenient.


我们学校的所有学生all the students in our school

左边数第五个男孩the fifth boy from the left

英国人的日常生活everyday lives of the British

在中国骑车的人数the number of cyclists in China

几种气体的混合物a mixture of several gases

三到六岁的孩子Children from 3 to 6 years of age

隔壁的音像店the music store next door

用英语写的信the letter(s) in English

晚上最晚一班返回的公交车the last bus back in the evening

城市生活的嘈杂、脏乱the noise and dirt of city life

当一个音乐家的计划plans to be a musician

出国学习的机会the chance to study abroad

供人坐着休息的安静场所a quiet place for people to sit in/rest

找到任何一个可以询问的人find anyone to ask

Writing tips:



e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me three hours.

His father thought he is good at math.

She started her new job last week. She liked it.

We didn’t go to the party. We aren’t invited.

2. 主语一致


e.g. Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country.

It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops his interests.

3. 主谓一致/人称一致, 确保语法正确。

e.g. Things I hate to do is doing homework.

Every people start to learn English.

Every person starts to learn English.

The activities can relax ourselves.

The activities can help us relax ourselves./We can relax ourselves by taking part in the activities.

4. 词序/语序。它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。 e.g. I already have had lunch.

She with her mum traveled to Italy.

I always be the winner of the piano contest.

In China, he knew there were big floods.

5. 并列句。用并列句能使文章更生动流畅,它包含两个独立分句和一个连词,如:and, but, or, so等。

e.g It was crowded. We were able to see him.

She is a top student. She is a talented musician.

Though he doesn’t have much money, but his heart is full of love.

文章的结构 --开头、主体和结尾


1. “开门见山”式的开头:一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单 明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

2. “条理清楚”的主体:理顺要点的先后表达顺序,并将各个单句按照其逻辑关系进行适当调整。

3. “点明主题”的自然结尾:文章的结尾没有固定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵 活创造。一种较为常见的结尾方法,是对一篇文章的中心思想、主要内容进行清晰明朗的总结,甚至是画龙点睛。恰当的总结和归纳往往会使文章增色。



第一段(开头): 主题句(第一句)





Time order:

First, …/First of all,… Next,…

Second,… After that,…

Third,… Then…

Space order

On the right,…On the left,…In the center,…In the middle,… Finally,…

Next to the…,…Beside the…,…Opposite the ______,…

Near the ______,…Under the ______,…Above the ______,…

On one side of the ______,…On the other side of the ______,…

Transition signals

1、递进:besides, in addition, what’s more

2、转折和对比:but, however, on the other hand,

3、总结:in short, in brief, for these reasons

4、因果和结论:as a result, due to, because of, thus, therefore

5、强调:really, indeed, surely

6、其它插入语:worse still/what’s worse, after all, if possible,

Sayings and proverbs:谚语

Pride goes before a fall 骄者必败 .

A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。

Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。

Custom makes all things easy.有个好习惯,事事皆不难。

Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。

Honesty is the best policy.做人诚信为本。

Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。

Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。

If a thing is worth doing, it’s worth doing well. 值得做的是就值得做好。

Where there is life, there is hope. 生活充满了希望。/留得青山在,不怕没柴烧

A close mouth catches no flies.病从口入。

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,不用请医生。

Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。

A mother's love never changes. 母爱永恒。

A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难,失朋友易。

A friend is never known till a man has need. 需要之时方知友。

A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.一本好书,相伴一生。

By reading we eich the mind, by conversation we polish it.读书使人充实,交谈使人精明。

Choose an author as you choose a friend.择书如择友。

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。

We know not what is good until we have lost it.好东西,失去了才明白。

Variety is the spice of life.丰富多彩是生活的调味品。

Life is just like a bowl of cherries.生活犹如一盘樱桃。

Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. 生活没有目标等于航行没有指南针。

Pleasant hours fly past.快乐时光去如飞。



开头:How nice to hear from you again.

Let me tell you something about the activity.

I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.

I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.

I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

结尾: With best wishes.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier



Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please?

I have an announcement to make.


ll the teachers and students are required to attend it.

Please take your notebooks and make notes.

Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.

Please come on time and don’t be late.


Please come and join in it.

Everybody is welcome to attend it.

I hope you’ll have a nice time here.

That’s all. Thank you.

三、议论文模板 正反观点式议论文模板

导入:第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should.。. (导入话题)

Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)

正文: 第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点) Here are the reasons. First.。. Second.。. Finally.。.(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)

Their reasons are as follows.

In the first place..

What’s more.

In addition..(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论: 第4段:Personally speaking/In my opinion ,/ To my mind ,/ As far as I am concerned ,/ I am ofthe opinion that …, the advantages overweight the disadvantages, for it will do us moreharm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)

4.“How to”类议论文模板:

导入: 第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文: 第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all.。. Another way to solve the problem is 。.. Finally.。.(列出2~3个 解决此类问题的办法)

结论: 第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should benoted that we should take action to.。.(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)



1. 上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以”My favorite place at School”为题征文,请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并请说明原因。提示词语:Classroom, reading-room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve.

My favorite place at school

My favorite place at school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of useful books, newspapers and magazines there.

I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.

I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to. Reading helps me forget all my troubles.

For me, the reading room is the place I like best.

2. 你觉得你的校园生活安全吗?请你写一篇题为”How to Keep safe in school”的短文,谈谈你的看法。




3. 呼吁每个学生要注意校园安全。

How to Keep safe in school

Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough. For example,Last month,my friend Tom fight with a classmate. And Tom chase the classmate. By the time he run into the classmate , the classmate had already closed the door, so Tom hit the door, and then he send to the hospital soon, and he stay in hospital about two weeks.

So, we should know the important of the safe in school. Here are my suggestions. We can't fight with others. And we should get on well with our classmates. What's more, we should be carefully in our school life. Let's keep safe in school, and have a better life!

3. 中招考试即将到来,许多学生感到压力很大,为此很烦恼。你校的校刊特意进行了课后放松方式的调查。请你以”Learn to relax yourself “为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示:






Learn to relax yourself

Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.

It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favorite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after a good rest.

4. Maggie 在英语学习中遇到一些困难,她写信向你求教并邀请你周末去她家。请你写回信应邀并向她介绍英语学习的方法(不少于两条),建议她用英语回信以提高英语表达能力。词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。

I’d love to visit you this weekend. I’m sorry that you have some trouble learning English. Let me give you some advice. Do you take notes in English class? It’s a good way to learn English grammar. And if you are poor in listening, you can watch English movies and listen to English songs. Why not write back in English? It will help you to improve your writing. I hope you will make great progress in your study of English.

5. 请以”My middled school life is______________”为题写一篇英语短文。



2.短文内容应包括三方面的信息:in the past, now 和in the future.



My middle school life is unforgettable

In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them, I got on well with my classmates, I was good at English and I liked playing basketball. Now I am interested in history because it is



1. 以Introduction About Myself为题,写一篇简短的自我介绍。

Introduction About Myself Hello, everyone, now I want to give you a introduction about myself. My name is Gina Green. Gina is my first name and Green is my family name. I am a girl at the age of 12. I like chatting on the Internet(上网),and my QQ number is 7845362. What's yours?



2. 以My English Teacher为题,写一篇短文。

My English Teacher Miss Wang is my English teacher. She looks very young. She's about thirty years old, and she wears glasses. She's funny . But she is strict with us. She wants us to study hard. Her lessons are interesting. We are very happy in her class and we all like her lessons. She is a good teacher, and we all like her.



3. 以My Friend为题,写一篇短文。

My Friend I have a good friend. Her name is May. She is 12 years old. Her telephone number is 87634966. Her birthday is March 5th. She is good at English and Chiese. She often plays the piano. She likes reading books and listening to the music. Her hobbies are reading and listening to music. She is a nice girl. We often help each other. We are good friends.


我有一个好朋友。她的名字叫梅。她12岁。她的电话号码是87634966 。她的生日是3月5日。她擅长英语和汉语。她经常弹钢琴。她喜欢看书和听音乐。她的爱好是读书和听音乐。她是一个好女孩。我们经常互相帮助。我们是好朋友。

4. 假设你是李枚,下面的照片是你的全家福,请你写一篇文章介绍你的家庭。 Hello,everyone! I'm Li Mei. Look! This is my family photo. This is my

grandmother. She is 58. This is my father. He is a teacher. He is 36,and my mother is 36,too. Who’s that boy? Oh, he is my brother. He is 13 and I am 12. My brother and I are students.


5. 假设这是TOM的房间,请你用80词左右介绍他的房间。

Look! This is Tom’s room. His photos are on the wall. His T-shirt is on the bed. His baseball bat is behind the dresser. The keys are in the drawer. The computer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s baseball? Oh, It’s under the bed. What is on the floor? They are Tom’s shoes, socks and computer games. What do you think of Tom’s room?


6. 用英语谈谈你对电影的看法。

Of all kinds of movies, I like comedies best. I think they're interesting. My favorite actor is Jackie. I like his movie King of Comedy. I think it’s a successful comedy. For action movies, I like The Lord of the Ring best. It’s exciting. I like documentaries because they’re true stories. I like only some thrillers. Many thrillers are scary and boring.


7. 请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的周末生活。

I have a good weekend. On Saturday morning,I do my homework. After lunch,

I go shopping with my mother. At about five o’clock, I go to play basketball with my friend. On Sunday, I watch a football game on TV. I often help my mother do housework. I watch TV with my parents in the evening. Then I go to bed at nine o’clock. I’m very happy on weekends.


8. 以 My Favorite…为题,写一篇短文。

My Favorite Subject My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is interesting. I have English every day. I can speak a little English. I join the school English club. Every afternoon I go there to talk in English. I can see English movies and read English books. I think it is useful for me. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.




9. 用英语介绍你的一日三餐。

Hello, everyone! I don’t like sports, but I like eating very much. I eat a lot food every day. For breakfast, I like milk, eggs and bread a lot . For lunch, I like French fries, chicken, hamburgers and apples. For dinnerr, I like fruits, vegetables and rice.


10. 以My Day为题写一篇英语短文。

My Day I get up early at six every day. After doing some morning exercises, I read English for twenty minutes. At seven I have breakfast. After breakfast I take my schoolbag and go to school. Our class begins at eight, and we have four classes in the morning. After lunch at 12 o’clock, I take a short rest in the classroom. We have three more classes in the afternoon. After school at five , I go back home. I often help my mother do some housework. Sometimes I watch TV. After dinner, I begin to do my homework. Then I take a shower. I go to bed at nine thirty.